Swept Away (Toni Blake)
Posted by CM under Reviews on Sat 28 Oct 2006
picked up a copy of Swept Away today and read it over dinner. Let me preface this by saying that as a general rule, I don’t like contemporaries. I guess I’ve just read too many of them where the women give up satisfying careers to be wives. I don’t have a problem with women taking time off–in fact, I see no way to get around in this world if one spouse doesn’t make him or herself more available (but–you know, it can be the guy).
I picked up a copy of Toni Blake’s “Swept Away” today because I read the excerpt she posted. It was smoking hot, but more importantly, the emotion really connected with me, and I just had to know what happened next. I read it over dinner, and I couldn’t put it down. It’s the ultimate fantasy–making That One painful rejection every girl remembers deep down in her pride, if not her heart, come right; the bad boy and the lawmaker (all in the same person); and the woman coming into her own.
And the writing just sizzles. The description hits home—at one point, she describes a series of short kisses as (I don’t have the book with me, so I’m paraphrasing) a series of short sips of hot liquid. I could just taste the words. And there is a point when the heroine is sitting on the beach and she does the most marvelous thing with a handful of sand. I felt like I knew her when the book ended, like she was a friend.
My only gripe was with the ending. Minor spoiler alert here. The blame ended up getting placed on two people, and I didn’t find the actions of one of them believable. I mean, an explanation was given, but I have a hard time imagining that such a person could be so lost to everything that the person wouldn’t realize some of the more frightening implications. Also I don’t understand why the other person–the real bad guy–wanted the heroine to begin with, and I think the story could have been cleared up just a bit if we’d gotten a hint as to his real motivations, which I imagine could have been clearly pecuniary. But this is tiny, tiny, tiny. I was just swept away by this one.
I haven’t read a ton of contemporaries, but damn. I’m going to have to start. And I think I’m starting with Toni Blake’s backlist.
EDIT: Okay, I’m going to say one last thing about this, a second thought I had after I got away from the sheer delight of this book. I do have to say that there is a make-it-all better aspect to the book, where the heroine doesn’t have to deal with the fact that ultimately, she did a Very Shitty Thing to another person. And the fact that the person she did it to was shittier doesn’t matter, because she didn’t know it at the time. It’s a — problem? — with romance novels in general. The heroes and heroines don’t suffer nearly as much as they ought. But there I am, moralizing where it doesn’t belong!









October 28th, 2006 at 11:43 pm
CM -
I, too, only started reading contemporaries recently, but you must start with The Queen - Susan Elizabeth Phillips.
Some examples of her brilliance:
Hannah’s team was up at bat first, and Kevin found himself on the pitcher’s mound facing the six-year-old who tucked his security blanket in the forsythia. Kevin made the mistake of glancing over at Molly and wasn’t surprised to see her give him a look that clearly said, “If you’re the kind of man who can strike out Linus, then you’re not the man i thought you were, and you can forget all about getting me naked anytime in the forseeable future, comprenez-vous?” He walked the kid. - This Heart of Mine
“You are planning to have a lot of sex scenes, aren’t you? You can hardly expect to sell fiction without them.”
“You know a lot about writing a novel, do you?”
“Not lesbian scenes either. I know how much you men like them, but women buy most of the books in this country, and that’s not a big turn-on for most of us.” She thought of Jewel. “Although, I suppose sticking one in wouldn’t hurt.”
“‘Sticking one in,’ interesting turn of phrase.”
“I’ve always had a gift for the spoken word… Personally, I’d like somebody to write a scene with one woman and two men. Oh heck, make it three.”
“I believe that’s why they invented porn.”
- Ain’t She Sweet
(Jane)”Don’t sneak up on me like that!”
(Cal)”I wasn’t sneaking. I’m just a quiet walker.”
“Well, stop it.”
“You are one grouchy fud.”
“Fud?”
“P.H.D. Us dumb jocks call you guys fuds.”
“Us fuds call you guys dumb jocks, which just goes to show how smart some of us fuds really are.”
- Nobody’s Baby But Mine
“All right, sweetheart. Here’s your last question, and its a real challenge, so don’t let yourself get distracted by these jealous women. To make sure all twelve of our future children are going to be legitimate, what New York City football team did Joe Namath play for?”
Gracie’s face fell. Lord. Any fool should know the answer to this one. New York City… What football team was from New York City? Her expression brightened.
“The New York City YANKEES!”
A roar of laughter went up from the crowd , accompanied by more than a few loud groans. Bobby Tom silenced them all with a glare. At the same time, the glitter in his eyes dared any of them to contradict her. When he was certain everyone understood the message, he turned back to Gracie and gathered her into his arms. With a tender look and a gentle brush of his lips, he said” Exactly right, sweetheart. I had no idea you knew so much about football” And that was how every last person in Telarosa, Texas came to understand that Bobby Tom Denton had finally and forever fallen head over heels in love.”
- HEAVEN TEXAS
“It was a kiss made in lonely dreams. A kiss that took its time. A kiss that felt so right she couldn’t remember all the reasons it was wrong.” - This Heart of Mine
As they began to mount the stairs, he looked up at his mother. “Just how many of those wine coolers did she drink?”
“She had three,” Suzy replied.
Three! Bobby Tom couldn’t believe it. After only three drinks, she’d stripped off her clothes and demanded that he have sex with her.
“Mom?” He shoved on his hat.
“Yes dear.”
“Whatever you do, don’t let her anywhere near a six-pack.” - Heaven, Texas
Wow, I think I need to go reread one of my SEP books - all this quoting has got me craving a fix!
Sara