Progress! she wrote
Posted by CM under Ornithology on Sat 25 Nov 2006
now have three chapters. It’s true what they say. You just have to sit your butt in a chair and write. Well, it turns out that my butt is nearly always in a chair, but I don’t nearly always have time to write, and often, what I want to do when I don’t have to do other things is stare vacantly into space.
Nonetheless, I have three chapters, amounting to some 14,000 words at present. This is not counting chapter seventeen, which it turns out, is not chapter seventeen, but will likely be chapter six or seven.
I use the word “finally” a great deal. This is because I have a number of characters who think for long periods of time before saying anything. There are a lot of pauses. Finally–see, I’m doing it!–someone speaks. Oh dear.









November 26th, 2006 at 12:18 am
Good. Keep going.
Alice
November 26th, 2006 at 9:02 am
Yahoo! 14,000 is quite an accomplishment — just remember, you gotta take all most of those finally’s out at the end, really. (When I cleaned up my latest manuscript, my biggest offender was REALLY).
November 26th, 2006 at 5:18 pm
If you’re worried about your pet words and phrases, take a look at ClichéCleaner. Even it its shareware form, it’s very helpful for catching patterns. You can download it here: http://www.cliches.biz/clichecleaner/
And congrats on the 14K mark!