ook! In the last two weeks, I’ve gone from 361 pages, to . . . 361 pages! And it only took me 5,000 words to do it, too!
There’s a certain kind of unholy glee that arises as the pages pile on, and the number of words gets larger and larger. It makes you feel like you’re progressing, even as your scenes slip into haphazard gobbledygook. Bigger numbers are better, right? Wrong. There’s something about highlighting 20 pages and pressing the delete key that’s just awful. Nobody likes having a negative word writing day. But even the common maxim, “save them in some other file–maybe you’ll use them!” didn’t help. They were bad. They were not good. They were very not good. Those three sentences will give you a decent idea of how very not good those pages were.
But I fixed it–and now I’ve nailed down the two hardest parts of the book: the black moment, and the necessary set up for it in a few key chapters before hand. There are still two major external threads I need to deal with. But I now know what the underlying emotion is for much of it, and I feel like I can go on. It’s liberating–even though today’s word count is officially negative four thousand.
What about you? What have been the hardest negative words you’ve ever written?









October 12th, 2007 at 8:08 am
I hate revising, if that tells you anything. I’ve been revising the same chapter for several weeks now and I just want to see the end of it. I’ve tried it in two POVs, in my heroine’s pov only, and now I’m rewriting in the hero’s.
A say celebrate the five words.
October 12th, 2007 at 11:00 am
I don’t mind so much deleting scenes and pages I know are BAD. It’s when I have to delete a scene that’s actually GOOD but that no longer contributes to the overall story and character arc that kills me. Yeah, I can save those words in another file, but if they aren’t doing anything for the book, they’re not going to go back in. Ever.
October 12th, 2007 at 6:13 pm
First, I’m having a heck of a time getting used to the comments being at the top. I always wind up on the wrong post. As for deleting bad material: What a relief! I love looking at the horrid parts and suddenly realizing I don’t actually need them. Toodaloo! No more ambling into scenes. No more moving folks from point a to point b on stage. Bye bye boring! The hardest part for me to cut in TWIST was getting rid of a character in my book. I really liked him, but he was detrimental to the story.
October 13th, 2007 at 2:22 pm
I actually hating deleting good lines… but they just don’t fit b/c I’ve deleted the scene or it’s become revised. And I really want to keep the first kiss how it is but… I don’t know if I can.
October 16th, 2007 at 8:51 am
OOoh, I can’t wait to see your new black moment. *rubs hands in glee*